ext_49266 ([identity profile] brightdreamer.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] brightdreamer 2009-12-15 05:56 am (UTC)

Actually, I thought about that. Or at least he might have not felt physically better. But that would have made the fic longer and I was already "meh" by that point. Maybe I can edit that a bit...

And yes, he is determined. More like stubborn, really.

EDIT: I did go back and change one of the last paragraphs a bit. See what you think... I kind of like it better now.

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